@gonnefishin @mischievoustomato @sun you are wrong.
sex scenes cannot be written in an artful way. fucking is universally pornographic. you have a maximum of 5 seconds before it stops being artful.
any important emotions and character development CAN and WILL be shown before or after the act of sex. and i say WILL because it DOES, your 10 minute bare ass fuck scene doesnt show anything besides "there was a sex".