nice prose too. stuff like "and her magical staff trailed a precession of bubbles with each swing." is simple, unpretentious (opposite of my writing lol), and shows a good grasp of vocabulary and form.
(different styles in the Cool Collective = good)
shame about the footnote stuff. IF you like this platform and plan to continue using it, i encourage you to sign up at their official write freely forum; they have a feature request board: