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@garius Great read! Thank you.

OOC, do you have any recommended reading for stuff like this? I love this corporate espionage stuff.

@FrostPoem #Microprompt: Lightning

"There was a man lying on the bed in the corner of the room. Lightning lit the small room and Sebastian could see the hair extend from his skull like white wires. His eyes bulged in the dark hollows beneath his brow. If not for the rolling puffs of vapor from his labored breaths, Sebastian would have thought that death had already taken him."

#EmpathAndAugur

@FrostPoem

“It looks like he'll be alright. We'll have to keep him at the hospital to make sure the infection doesn't progress to sepsis, but he's responding well to antibiotics. Any later would have been dangerous.”
Erika nodded, listening more to the doctor's cool tone than to the words themselves. Sebastian was asleep on the bed beside her, looking dangerously frail hooked up to an IV.

#microprompt #EmpathAndAugur

@FrostPoem

"By daylight---and the scant interior lighting---there was much to want from the cabin. A smell of must pervaded the air---only damp and not mold, if they were lucky. The room was cramped with too large furniture, and the remaining space was filled with clutter. The doors and window frames fit poorly, warped by years of unchecked humidity and temperature. In all honesty, it wasn’t any larger than his old prison cell."

#microprompt #EmpathAndAugur

@aaribaud You know, I have. And I think that's what I thought I signed up for, but actually signed up for something completely different.

Regardless, have you used it? How was your experience?

Latest update in my quest to find writing buddies:

Found this public google group and posted a bunch there: https://groups.google.com/g/critique-partner-matchup
So we'll see if we get any bites.

Also signed up for critiquematch.com, which I'm not 100% sure about, but I'll give it a go.

Also, anyone on mastodon looking for a critique partner or just has some stuff they'd like to swap for feedback already has my attention :)