Notices by Princess Unikitty (unikitty@kolektiva.social)

@thomasfuchs
Me, rendering my verdict:
https://kolektiva.social/@unikitty/112009676088607213

@RickGaehl @pluralistic
And in colonized territories, it started with the missionary's bell.

Clocks and bells were a critical part of bending people's lives to clock time (as opposed to natural time)

@hakan_geijer
Page 11: "how frequently they are use[d]"

Page 18: "it becomes clear one of their goal[s] isn't real"

Page 25: "shutting down to avoid all risk just plain sucks lmao" <- no notes I just love this aside

Page 31: "...thinking that one or their crew is so special..." <- not sure whether this is intended to be "one of their crew" or whether "one" is short for "someone" and that it is written as intended.

Page 32: "and the impact [of] nearly every threat..."

BOOM! That's it. Everything else looks good. Thanks again for making this. Will definitely recommend to others.

@hakan_geijer

I'm not all the way through and still waiting for my coffee to kick in, but here's notes through Page 7:

Overall, finding it useful. Content is understandable and well-written. That sweet spot of explaining semi-technical concepts while still keeping them relatable.

Page 3 appears to be missing "is" : "A strategy [is] a specific set of actions..."

Page 6 appears to be missing a "we" (or "a crew") : "Most of what [we] do..."

Minor nitpick on Page 6 : "if you’re just writing down only what you already know" - "just" and "only" are a bit redundant and you could cut one of them (keep the first one IMO). Again, this is minor and could be a stylistic choice.

@hakan_geijer

Amazing and thanks! I have been looking for something like this. Would you like minor copy edits?

@unworthyBeatrix
I'm afraid embedded light strips remain in the realm of scalpel work... for now

@inthehands
I'd argue that all institutions "want" (in an abstract way) to preserve their existence and power. States especially "want" this and can be very aggro about it.

@thomasfuchs I love to shit-talk Elno but if making rockets was all he did I would be much less annoyed by his antics.