@thomasfuchs @RnDanger @jonne @peter
I think the point of it is more to identify parts of a sentence that, while being grammatically correct, are worded in a way that's "hard to read" or whatever. An LLM would be very good at suggesting alternative ways to say the same thing.
But as you have pointed out elsewhere, that's essentially what an editor does.
I'm not arguing it's a good use of the technology, just that it's such a trivial application that it's not really worth talking about.