@Oblivia @Terry @Waerloga @dcc @ehhh @ins0mniak @jasonl8446 @lunarised @mia @mischievoustomato @p @sjw @thebitchisback @threat @warmbeverageenjoyer the only way i would improve the novel is to delete all the political-cultural commentary, no one gives a shit about that and my own views have changed radically since writing this. The action scenes where he is sitting around playing video games or driving in a car and causing chaos, are fucking bad ass tho.