Why are you doing these depictions like a horizontal timeline? Probably because you highlight events and decisions in your life?

For me, such a timeline would be in circles or spirals (or even three-dimensional bubbles) because I'd put less emphasis on events and decisions but on moods, states of soul, developments, occurring and re-occuring questions. "Ah, this same old pitfall, again!" It would depict how questions evolved, topics in my life changed, calls heard and answered... or not answered. In fact, this timeline of mine would incorporate the voices of pals and families, past and future, as they are voices "inside" me making up what feels to me. And I guess I'd concentrate less on what was my "development" has been but what it was that kept me going despite... And that would be something already appeaing in the beginning, I guess.

But, anyway, no critique, just a bit of bafflement.