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@davidrevoy @cwebber

I don't want to sound like I'm explaining this to you because telling this to a comics artist is embarrassing, I'm just telling what I notice at a glance as a comics reader:
that page looks *wrong*. The two characters are open-mouthed and excited looking *away* from the thing they mention. The third panel contains nothing relevant. The last two panels are absurd, in part because that's manga-style and I'm trying to read them right-to-left.