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   13 barn owls in a trenchcoat (hauntedowlbear@eldritch.cafe)'s status on Sunday, 04-Aug-2024 02:03:28 JST 13 barn owls in a trenchcoat

   • Njord

   Hey, @Njord - Eni got to hear all about this when I was doing the final proofreading pass on the script, but I really loved your writing on KS - I was laughing at the jokes and squeeing over the plot developments as I went along. Really solid narrative work. <3

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     13 barn owls in a trenchcoat (hauntedowlbear@eldritch.cafe)'s status on Wednesday, 07-Aug-2024 05:12:54 JST 13 barn owls in a trenchcoat

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     • Njord

     @Njord Yes! (Finally! I've not been at the PC much since I messaged)

     I loved the Samurai's dialogue and evolving friendship with Yuzu ("That does not bode well."), absolutely cackled at Yuzu talks to her mom after the Earth World and basically all of Kiri's incredibly sharp and characterful dialogue, and I think Kamino's a really cool villain and you make the most of his limited screen time.

     Oh, and probably the thing that made me snort hardest over the script: "Many speak of your fine tail, indeed." (hehehe)

     And yes, I did want to do this with the script open so I didn't miss any especially important faves!

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     Njord (njord@peoplemaking.games)'s status on Wednesday, 07-Aug-2024 05:12:55 JST Njord

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     @HauntedOwlbear Thank You! She did mention that you enjoyed it, and I really do appreciate hearing that from you, especially since you're a writer yourself. I'd love to know a couple things you particularly liked if you don't' mind? Release week is stressful and it makes me happy to hear what people liked.