@TrevorGoodchild @Escoffier >Hydrogenation created “trans-fats” which studies indicate doubled the risk of heart disease for every 2% consumed . Meanwhile, American’s were consuming upwards of 10kg a day.
This should be
>Hydrogenation created “trans-fats” which studies indicate doubled the risk of heart disease for every 2% increase in trans fat consumed. Meanwhile, American diet increased trans fat consumption by 10% over the indicated period.

A few other phrasings made it hard to read for me since I got dyslexia