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   Ota_1504 (ota1504@varishangout.net)'s status on Tuesday, 12-Aug-2025 03:21:35 JST Ota_1504

   • 犬山健壱/水滴屋
   @s4shiki quizás la ausencia de publico nuevo podría ser por temporada baja?
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     @Ota1504 シンプルに僕が人気ないからじゃない？

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     • 犬山健壱/水滴屋
     @s4shiki
     estas seguro de eso?
     y si lo que se necesita quizás, es reexaminar la creación del guion?
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     犬山健壱/水滴屋 (s4shiki@pawoo.net)'s status on Tuesday, 12-Aug-2025 03:26:32 JST 犬山健壱/水滴屋

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     @Ota1504
     あー　話が下手で駄目なんですね…なるほど反省・・・ごめんなさい

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     犬山健壱/水滴屋 (s4shiki@pawoo.net)'s status on Tuesday, 12-Aug-2025 04:46:47 JST 犬山健壱/水滴屋

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     @Ota1504 見たけど、多分そういう問題じゃないと思うのでごめんなさい

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     @s4shiki
     You are a painter and a writer after all...
     Based on this...
     You could try writing a script first...
     Transcription,summarizing a method to write interesting ..:
     1: An idea that arouses curiosity or makes you think to find it.
     Close your eyes and let the thoughts flow...
     1a:
     What has happened to you lately?
     What do you like?
     What bothers you?
     Write everything down, then choose what catches your attention the most and think...
     How can I tell it in an interesting way?
     2: Build the essay like a house, structure:
     1: The introduction:
     Present the topic.
     You can use an intriguing question or a surprising phrase,
     something that makes the reader say, “I want to know more!”
     2: Development: story or idea...
     Organize your thoughts into clear paragraphs, as if each one were a different window.
     Use examples, details, and above all, connect what you say well.
     As if you were leading the reader by the hand without getting lost.
     3: Conclusion:
     Summarize what is important and leave a lasting impression:
     It can be a reflection, a powerful phrase, or even something that invites further thought beyond what you wrote.
     4: Review, read your text aloud!
     Does it sound natural?
     Are there any mistakes?
     Could it sound better?
     Polishing your text is like tuning an instrument—small adjustments that make a big difference.
     If you want it to shine, use:
     compactions,
     interesting adjectives,
     questions that make people think...
     It's your personal touch that transforms your writing into something unforgettable.
     Writing well isn't just about following steps, it's about making your words matter.
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     @s4shiki Text source
     https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PVflasnjaGY
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     @s4shiki
     “Borrowed quote: Jesús G. Maestro”
     Canonical definition of literature:
     
     a human construction
     that opens a path to freedom through struggle and dialectical confrontation
     that uses linguistic signs
     to which it adds an aesthetic or poetic value
     that it assumes a fictional status in all its components
     that it is part of a communicative process with pragmatic and social dimensions, that is, specifically, a communicative process with dimensions that are:
     Historical, geographical, and social
     that literature is composed of four core components:
     The authors
     The works
     The readers
     The translators
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     Ota_1504 (ota1504@varishangout.net)'s status on Tuesday, 12-Aug-2025 05:55:23 JST Ota_1504

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     @s4shiki
     Okay, that's a good point...!
     We've already crossed off the list
     “the writing”
     Another item that remains is the
     “original idea for a manuscript” 🙇♂️
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     @Ota1504
     すみません
     言われても非常に困るんですが…