@sos @siguza Thanksfully this isn't a legal text ready to be ratified, it's the outline of a petition that, if it gathers enough votes, enables the proposers to engage in a bilateral dialog with the EU commission.
There's no sense in nitpicking wording at this stage, as the intent is quite clear, especially if you've been following the campaign all along.
(see https://citizens-initiative.europa.eu/how-it-works_en )