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   Albert ARIBAUD ✎ (aaribaud@mastodon.art)'s status on Saturday, 28-Oct-2023 18:02:59 JST Albert ARIBAUD ✎

   • Strange Seawolf

   @strangeseawolf

   I'd go with

   "This is going to hurt" was her last thought.

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     @aaribaud Thank you! :11111:

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     • Strange Seawolf

     @strangeseawolf

     Note that

     1) I am French; my English writing is probably tainted.

     2) You could also put it this way:

     Her last thought was "this is going to hurt."