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I mean, considering it features 3 rhyming syllables across 5 lines, slant rhymes, internal rhymes that rhyme at every second beat - and the fact I wrote it without any music, in my head and in under two minutes it's perfectly passable for those limitations.
You sound like a very angry person who just likes to pull people down. I've met a lot of people like you, usually they have accomplished little and are bitter of this fact, crab bucket mentality and all that.
For context:
it's a [threat] if we get locked in a [cage match]
gonna be [dead] like your name is [8 track]
fists hit your [head], same time, [ajax]
getting this [bread] but i'm also getting [payback]
watch where you [tread] or ya gonna end up [laid flat]